Dradian Far Runes

This is one of the most heart-rendingly beautiful stories I have ever read. Thank you so much for sharing this with the world. :)

Wow this is amazingly visceral and introspective poem. I LOVE the "Yet this distortion of punk Will reside perpetually inside this ragged body" line so much. And the part where ...

Wow, awesome job with this. It fits the song perfectly. I like your writing style, it has the clearness and easy-to-readness as Percy Jackson, except, in my opinion, its much ...

Interesting! Very well done! ^-^ A couple of the words struck me as a little... dunno, off, i guess. "Abhor" and "Faculties", for instance... somehow not very poetic. xD But, ...

Wow! Love the imagery, and the story.... wow. :wink:

Dude, I love it! ^-^ Too bad there's only a 'like' button... :wink:

Ooh, nice to see some honest emotions around here! Sometimes this lyric poetry stuff gets me so confuzzled.... xD ^-^ *Likes*

WOW. This is, like amazing! Love the description... its so onimous and engrossing! Hope you will expand upon this idea... ^-^ -M.E.

If ya'll be askin' me, Mcdonald's is first place as the American Restaurant I Am NOT Proud Of. Ugh.... Burger King isn't that great either, but that was pretty hilarious! ...

I'm Un-liking! *Just kidding* XD Actually, its still really good! ^-^ The only problem i have with the latest additions is the "holy sh-." Its just kindof a jolt for ...

Thats an awesome poem, June! ^-^

Hey June! Thanks so much for the review! ^-^ Well, that is a great metaphor on your part. ^-^ "Smile inside..." I'm so glad somone appreciates my inventive and oftentimes ...

Excelllant! ^-^ -realms

Spectaculous story! ^-^

Hey, thanks for ze critiquez! ;-) yeah, thats the cool thing about short poems, you don't have to worry about boring anyone. Plus, short can be more powerful. I wrote ...